Dr Bluethumb
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Hello I am trying to upgrade my English for fun. And decided that trying to do an essay on live food would help, please help with some suggestions on how to make this a better essay. I have a grade 12, but failed to do good in english class. please help with my upgrading.
Live phytoplankton and copepods are more nutritious than other foods. Firstly, they are loaded with calories in the form of carbohydrate which then break down into glucose, and this glucose is an immediate source of energy for the nervous system and muscles. The marine organisms that eat phytoplankton and copepods include corals, sponges, fishes, chittons and worms. Secondly, they contain multivitamins A, B, C, D, E, K and minerals such as calcium, Iron, magnesium, manganese, phosphorus, potassium, sodium and zinc. These micro nutrients help the immune system, support normal cell growth, division and restoration.Thirdly, they are high in protein as much as 60% and amino acids which are the building blocks of marine animals cells and tissues. Protein and amino acids are mainly responsible for the animals movement and to build and repair tissues.Finally, they have essential fatty acids, EPA and DHA in them which ensure diffussion of sufficient nutrients within the organisms structure. EPA and DHA have many biological effects, most notably communication within the cells and between the cells. For these reasons, live phytoplankton and copepods are more nutritious than dead, frozen or dried artificial foods.
Live phytoplankton and copepods are more nutritious than other foods. Firstly, they are loaded with calories in the form of carbohydrate which then break down into glucose, and this glucose is an immediate source of energy for the nervous system and muscles. The marine organisms that eat phytoplankton and copepods include corals, sponges, fishes, chittons and worms. Secondly, they contain multivitamins A, B, C, D, E, K and minerals such as calcium, Iron, magnesium, manganese, phosphorus, potassium, sodium and zinc. These micro nutrients help the immune system, support normal cell growth, division and restoration.Thirdly, they are high in protein as much as 60% and amino acids which are the building blocks of marine animals cells and tissues. Protein and amino acids are mainly responsible for the animals movement and to build and repair tissues.Finally, they have essential fatty acids, EPA and DHA in them which ensure diffussion of sufficient nutrients within the organisms structure. EPA and DHA have many biological effects, most notably communication within the cells and between the cells. For these reasons, live phytoplankton and copepods are more nutritious than dead, frozen or dried artificial foods.